Another part of a bigger work-in-progress. I thought posting chapters of the rough draft (and by rough I mean this is the very first draft, yikes), might make me more accountable in continuing my journey of actually writing it. Any feedback, criticism, whether you like it or hate it, I want to hear it.
If you’re curious, you can find the first chapter here.
Thanks! I hope you enjoy it!
Chapter II - Exploration
The problem with adults is that they no longer see what’s directly in front of them. The problem with children is that they can see everything; things that get played off as an overactive imagination are often very, very real.
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Exploration did little to improve Timmy’s overall opinion of that new house. If anything, it only made it much, much worse.